it was a dark, cold night.......part 2
there we were, PinkDogg, Spot and me, alone, in the dark, wondering ...........
we heard a noise ........................... strange steps coming up to the front door, then the screen door slowly opeeennninggggg .................... then, the front door handle ratttttlled, then ratttttlled again. “Who was doin’ that?” we wondered, “and why ??? “
then the footsteps retreated and went around to the back of the house. “Oh no”, we wondered, “did anyone remember to lock the porch door???” then we heard ................... squeeeeekkk – the sound of the porch door opening ..................... “Did anyone lock the door from the porch to t he house? ?” – “they often forget” ................
we had to plan quickly. PinkDogg wanted to stay together – “safety in numbers” he said.
but i thought we had to split up, just in case the “unthinkable” happened. PinkDogg, with my help, slid into a desk drawer and I closed it after him.
Spot made his way to a shelf, and assumed a disguise.
it was up to *ME * to confront the intruder. i stealthily slipped into the hall and tip-pawed into the kitchen. it was too dark, and the table blocked my view. the only way to discover *WHO* the intruder was, was, was ………… to JUMP on the kitchen table!!
“i’m sorry Mom, I know you don’t like me up there” , but duty called!!
i ….. quietly….. made the leap and
!!!!!!!!! **CRASH** !!!!!!!
“What was that???”
i heard fumblings in the dark ……. "what was happening ????? "
i heard steps across the dining room, and sensed someone ……. reaching ……. reaching …… i got ready to pounce …… ready to defend my turf ….. then **!*!BRIGHT LIGHTs !*!** were in my eyes, I ~ ~squinted ~ ~ and tried to shield myself ...........................................
then.............................
then............................
then...........................
i heard ...................... a VOICE ...............................
...eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkk ...........................................
16 Comments:
For some reason, we bet you were in trouble by your Mom because 'beans never seem to believe that we are just defending the place...~merlin, Shadow, Ko Ko
Then what????
Dude...didja break something???
oh - oh - oh.....it's so exciting.....!!
[gets firm grip on pillow]
Wot happened next??
Charlie
Oh gosh, are you ok Edsel? Who was it? What crashed? I hope you're all right!!!
That was very brave of you!
Ohmy! Edsel, what happened???
And? And?
Ut oh! You were so brave Edsel. I hope your beans understand that you were just defending your home (and that what crashed wasn't too valuable to the beans). The tuxie stapler found a great disguise, by the way. But what happened after the eeeeeeeek???
Edsel's Mom, I saw you had to get anti bio ticks pills on Oreo's blog. (What's a bio tick?) I hope you feel lots better real soon and I'll say purrayers for you. :)
boni - edselsmom here. i am feeling a little better, thank you. the antibiotics (pills to make the bronchitis go away) are working. edsel will update everyone soon.....
You are such a brave cat! We always hide and hope that the humans save us!
Opus and Roscoe
Hey Edsel's mom. I'm glad you're feeling better. Jeremy's on 2 inhalers, an anti bio tick (I don't know what that is either...hope it's not like regular ticks!!) and a steroid. (Mom hates that last one even though they always help him.)
Keeping us waiting for you to continue the story, huh? That's a good technique to increase suspense. I've used it before. . .
Stand your ground man...and can I borrow that inhaler please....?
Edsel,
What's goin' on dude? Did the eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkkk get you or what? Edsel, are you there..........
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